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All Deviations
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Yellow is all the Rage

Journal Entry: Mon Aug 1, 2005, 10:24 AM
I apologize for dropping out of sight again. I have been away on business and without any internet access. To my amazement and utter dismay I have returned to find that I am almost late for a war. For the years that I have been a member of dA I have always enjoyed my infrequent acquaintance with Scott Jarkoff. He is an exceptional person and to me he is deviantART. To see him undermined this way has not had a positive affect on my present state of mind. This is my simple statement of protest. Without °jark there is no dA for me and without his reinstatement and the voluntary, or involuntary, resignation of $spyed this is the end of my involvement with this website. Unfortunately, this means that I will not renew all of the subscriptions that I maintain for myself and my friends. I apologize to everyone that this will affect. If the situation changes I will certainly resume that maintenance but until then I cannot support this site.

I have no intention of abandoning my friends here. I have been planning my own website for a long time now and I will post that link as soon as I can. I am also available via email, Megatron@killbots.com.

  • Listening to: At The Drive-in - Enfilade

Devious Journal Entry

Journal Entry: Sun Jan 16, 2005, 12:15 PM

Critical Analysis and Feedback
(A.K.A. - How I intend to use Scraps. -)


All of my new poems will be copied into my Scrapbook. If you would like to see my personal analysis of why my poems are what they are, get into my head, and finally understand what the hell I am talking about then you might want to check out the Scrapbook version. I will break down all of my poems into lines, important phrases or words, and any kind of abstract thought or form and try to explain what I was doing in the description for each poem. If you think there is anything to be learned from my writing methods then please let me know when I say something helpful.

I'm also doing this to disassociate my "finished" work from receiving constructive criticism. If you want to leave me a constructive critique on a particular point then please find the poem in my Scrapbook and leave your suggestion there. Obviously, I cannot force anyone to conform to this commenting practice. However, if you have read this, that is my preferred form of feedback. That way I know for sure that you have read my reason for using a certain word, or whatever, when I see your criticism. Knowing that will help me to see comments in relation to my own intentions.

I do appreciate all of the comments that I get, but anyone should be able to realize that "it's great" is a lot harder to understand as relevant to my work than "I hate how you used...", and "It's a little hard to follow you where you say...", and "The third line really means a lot to me personally, because...". So, if your purpose is to help me as a writer or you do have a serious interest in the process of my writing then please take the time to clearly state your thoughts and reactions. They are invaluable to me. Even the ones that I totally disagree with. ;]

Thank you for reading.

D. SUMMERS


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Featured Writing: Rogue, by `MattSpire

I commented and added this to my favourites as my other account. It was submitted in February of '04. I am still one of only two +favs this has gotten. I have absolutely no idea why. Please read it.


Featured Writing: DEATH OF A DREAMSEEKER, by *Bringa

The Expected
The Unexpected
The Corrected
The Resurrected


WRITING HELP
Kinglyaxeman's Punctuation I
Kinglyaxeman's Punctuation, II, III & IV



Bloodlust

Pulse
feel it
Rhythmically quickening
as you
Pierce the vein
Enjoy the pain
Sensually flowing
over skin
Revulse
this is
Surrendering to the need
to become
Excited by the penetration
Aroused by the injection
Willing to feed
and then
Convulse
violently, passionately
Drinking too deeply
Blame your weakness
you must
Sustain this sickness
Satiate this
Lust to bleed

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  • Listening to: Adagio - Prophecies of Loki